Use the quotes and attribution rules in the Newsgathering and Interviewing lecture in your Course Resources to help you correct these sentences.
For each change you make, and for each decision that you make to leave a sentence alone, you must explain the rule that you applied using the rules listed in the Newsgathering and Interviewing lecture in the Course Resources.
1. The D.C. Circuit Court of Appeals said the tax credits available under the 2010 health-care law may be provided only to residents of states that set up their own marketplaces.
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2. Michael Bociurkiw, a spokesman for the Organization for Security and Cooperation in Europe, said Tuesday in Donetsk that 290 was “the last number [of bodies] we were told” had been recovered. “We had no possible way to verify that count.”
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3. “When it rains, it spores”, said Susan Kosisky, chief microbiologist with the U.S. Centralized Allergen Extract Laboratory in Silver Spring.
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4. When questioned about the slow recovery of the bodies, Borodai said the separatists were eager for the victims to be removed quickly from the debris field.
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5. “We’ll never go back to the slow death. Our demands are fair and they are humane,” Haniyeh said. “Our people have decided.”
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6. “I will tell you this,” Perry argued, his voice growing louder. “If the federal government does not do its constitutional duty to secure the southern border of the United States, the state of Texas will do it!”
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7. “All the basement doors were pad-locked, key-cylinder locked, or blocked by boards uh plywood,” the firefighter said.
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8. We are aware of his arrest in Prince William County and are cooperating fully with the police investigation there, said a spokeswoman for the Arlington County police. Mr. Silva has been placed on administrative leave without pay pending the outcome of the investigation.
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9. The Hamas leader said Hamas fighters would not put down their weapons until Israel and Egypt agree to open border crossings, ease travel and the flow of goods, and free prisoners who were jailed after the killing of the Jewish teenagers in the West Bank last month.
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10.Verduzco, 32, who lived at the shelter between the ages of 6 and 24, believes the home’s founder was tough but fair. “If she hadn’t been, she couldn’t have controlled us,” he said.
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